it wouldn't offend me I am glad that someone was able to use my words for enjoyment or whatever. I am glad you liked it I have many more but this is the only one that is copywright.
In a lot of ways it is hard to not grieve for the ones you have loved and lost. the fact that this was done for one in as you put it "loving memories" I feel it is not right for me to say much else except for I think that if the one who this was wrote for were reading this as I am they would be truly touched by it.